Good job on the review and I look foward to seeing the picures alongside it.
I read it through, and I was only able to find a few capitalization errors, and there was one sentence that could be reworded:
"G6- Bushings and Shims
The bushings included were a clear plastic. But they were as well 7mm bushings."
Maybe something like: "The bushings included are 7mm bushings, and are made of clear plastic." Or something like that.
I can re-read it more thoroughly again later, as It's going to be pretty busy for me for the next two days. But other than that, nice job.
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